Longer than the previous part (The Crowded Bird), I feel like i'm really getting the hang of things now. I've found a good voice for Anisha, and the descriptions of other members of the caravan was fun to do.
This makes more sense with the preamble and the first part i've you not read that, they're very short.
I'm actually curious how well this holds up and how understandable it is outside of what it's written for (Stories for a TTRPG Setting).
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