Found this going through my old stuff at my mother's house, I would have been 7 or 8 when I made this. A natural right?:free-real-estate:

  • TheLegendaryCarrot23 [he/him]
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    2 years ago

    I feel like your trolling us (im very trollable) but if you actually wrote this when you were 7 or 8 then you unironically have a pretty special mind .

    • HoChiMaxh [he/him]
      hexagon
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      2 years ago

      Haha it is legit comrade, I can show you other poems from this collection if it would convince you - one is actually even cooler but would dox me. The other one is plainly much worse like a child obviously wrote it, but in it I do assert that on Saturday I swindled seventy states which isn't bad I suppose

      • TheLegendaryCarrot23 [he/him]
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        2 years ago

        lol dude that's awesome . Not to be too dramatic and blow smoke up your ass but the line "I am 23 water proof flees eating the sun" reminds me of the prose in Las Chants De Maldoror which is one the greatest poem's ever written.

        • SuperZutsuki [they/them, any]
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          2 years ago

          Okay, I want to check out that poem but I don't know French and there's like 7 translations. Any idea which one I should go for?

          • TheLegendaryCarrot23 [he/him]
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            2 years ago

            https://books.google.com/books/about/Maldoror_Les_Chants_de_Maldoror.html?id=EEyxCgAAQBAJ#v=onepage&q&f=false