@Nakoichi @Kanna @MiraculousMM mods could I get a pin here please, thanks!

Looked it over somewhat briefly, so this is kind of an initial impression.

For how 'simple' the stats are, the system reads pretty jargon heavy. I found I had to constantly check the glossary and rules for stuff just trying to understand the basics of how combat and exploration work. Now that I think I've gotten how it works, it seems like a pretty cool system, but it's somewhat lacking in presentation as it stands.

So, like, as one example, the action system. You say you can use one long, two quick, or four brief. (It also says "In addition each Actor may use a Free Action, (After Two Free Actions the next Free Action becomes a Brief Action).", which is kind of confusingly worded). That action system works, but its what I mean about 'jargon heavy'. I feel like it'd be better to either use a more 'gamey' term (call them, I dunno, single actions, double actions, and quad actions, or something numeric like that), or have symbols associated with them (like Pathfinder and older DnD editions have, maybe something like a four section clock, with one, two, or four 'wedges' filled in). Calling one action "quick" and another "brief" is also a little confusing, since they are synonyms. (reminds me of World of Darkness's awful games language, where 'instant actions' take a whole turn, while 'reflexive' actions are free. I love you WoD, but you're editing leaves a lot to be desired.)

Some other similar layout things, are going through the example explocations/combats/socials. Its great to have those, but I feel like they need a few more rules references/explanations. Page numbers would also be great to reference, for example, the page of the glossary the Obstacle's rules are located, or at least summarize what the obstacles and player abilities do in the example.

I also wish is had a few more rules summary pages. Like, just a brief section of 'here is an abridged overview of how character creation works, what combat looks like, what exploration looks like, how most 'resolution mechanics' work.' Jumping into the section on 'Life Path Rewards' or 'Combat Tones' immediately drops you into keyword heavy specifics, and I think it'd be nice for each of those types of sections to have just like a paragraph summary/overview in non-keyword language. Similarly, I wish there was a page just labeled 'character creation'. Like, I found the rules eventually hopping from 'core rules' to 'life paths', but I feel like the section on making a character should be in its own 'character creation' section.

And, for another example of what I mean by 'this book could use more summaries, core rules says "Within Encounters Actions between Actors are resolved with the Opposed Roll." Since this is right at the beginning of the book, running into something like that right of the bat isn't very helpful. I think it'd be better with something like: "Within Encounters Actions between Actors are resolved with the Opposed Roll (Each rolling a d6, and sometimes each adding an attribute, see page 16)."

Oh, and with this many keywords, it'd be nice to have generally formatting for 'this is a Keyword in the Glossary", something like bolding, underlineing, italicizing, different font, etc.

I know for all of this the the book isn't finalized, and adding in some of this stuff is unreasonable before the art and stuff has been added, so its not really meant to be 'complaints' so much as 'this would make the book easier to understand'. Its also mostly issues with wording and editing. Something like balance is hard to grasp just looking stuff over, but it seems like a pretty slick system.

This looks really interesting! I'm not sure about playtesting but I could give the book an editorial read. DM me if you're interested and would be willing to share a doc/odt.

Looks cool. I'm not an rpg player but all I can say is that making your own game is really cool

You've got a setting year mixup in the first two sections.

"The game is set 2,000 years after the ship crashed"

"set in the year 1202 after the ship’s crash"